Book Doctor ~ Editor
Anita D. McClellan
From concept into print since 1988

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"Break up the larger story into its components, make sure you understand the exact function of each component (a story [nonfiction or fiction] is like a machine with numerous gears: it should contain no gear that doesn't turn something), and after each component has been carefully set in place, step back and have a look at the whole. Then rewrite until the story flows as naturally as a river, each element so blending with the rest that no one, not even yourself two years from now, can locate the separate parts." -- John Gardner

"Hire a freelance editor.... Writing is a collaborative process and a trusted freelance editor can whip your manuscript into shape." --agent Taryn Fagerness


• In mid-revision and spinning your wheels on honing the current draft?
• Is your submission package or sample chapter(s) getting bites but not landing an offer?
• Exhausted all usable feedback from your writing group and trusted readers?

Get this publishing insider to analyze your current working draft. Find out the big-picture issues so your revisions can build on strengths as well as shore up weaknesses. Only then will your manuscript be ready for a line edit!

Call Anita (see right-hand column) with questions about booking a Read and Evaluate on a partial or complete manuscript--before you invest in full-blown editing!


An ideal service for not-ready-yet submission packages to get your revision head working effectively.
Then just take the editorial report and run with it!

What you get from my Read and Evaluate:
A report in writing/​phone/​person on
• what works, what doesn't work and why (fiction: action scenes, pacing, point of view, character development & arc, motivation, time and place; nonfiction: organization, scholarship, competition)
• writing mechanics (syntax, language, rhythm, story continuity)
• submission and marketing strategies

Added values:
• saved time getting to the nub of your revision process
• saved money on editing costs by first making your draft the best it can be
• 15-minute post-report conference by email or telephone
• discounts on services for the same work in progress
• no-cost MP3 download recording of phoned report with transcript option
• insights into your writing process and project
• reality check and accountability on writing goals and deadlines
• focus, inspiration, challenge with viable next steps for your work in progress

Flat fee prepaid: $497.00 USD Note: Editorial services may be tax deductible; ask your tax advisor.







Read and Evaluate up to 15,000 words is a first-come, first-served prepaid editorial service.

• Evaluating big-picture issues in article- and book-length manuscripts, adult and juvenile, nonfiction and fiction, for commercial, scholarly, or self-publication
• Writing coach
• Contract vetting--before you sign your rights away to an agent or publisher
• Author-platform development
• Book submission strategies
• Deconstructing, editing, rewriting: nonfiction book proposals, synopses (fiction), query letters, any submission material

"very helpful" • "laser-like insight"


Ask me about coaching once, weekly, monthly, on demand to gain
• insights into your writing process and work in progress
• collaboration with a publishing-industry insider
• recording of each coaching session by MP3 download with transcript option
• setting and accountability on your writing goals and deadlines
• focus for your writing with inspiration, challenge, viable next steps

• Partial or full in-depth evaluation of fiction or nonfiction with report emailed or delivered orally with MP3 download of discussion
• Contract vetting: negotiating tips and clause by clause in plain English
• Contract negotiations when you have an offer but don't need an agent
• Editor and Coach Combo: Brainstorm by phone, email, in person a synopsis, book proposal, work in progress, agent/​editor pitch, query letter for any category of writing, hook to sell an idea to magazines, likely agents, viable book publishers, building an author platform, your target market and/​or your competition

Copyright © 2005-2010 Anita D. McClellan Associates, 464 Common St., Suite 142, Belmont, MA 02478 USA; (617) 575-9203--email gives me time to think before I speak. All rights reserved. Literary consultancy only. BETTER BUSINESS BUREAU ACCREDITED

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"Thanks for your effective editing. I am excited about learning and making improvements, and I had gone as far as I could on my own." -- Michele Deppe, author of forthcoming MINDING JACKSON

"On one trip to Rwanda to film Dr. Dian Fossey and gorillas, I met Anita McClellan, who had edited Dian's book, GORILLAS IN THE MIST. It was Anita who convinced me that other people share my interest in animal words. That's when the concept of ZOOLEXICON took form.... My gratitude to Anita McClellan for her great help in getting ZOOLEXICON published." -- Warren Garst, Chief Wildlife Photographer for the TV series "Mutual of Omaha's Wild Kingdom": http:/​/​lib.colostate.edu/​wildlife/​

Writers who know my work include


Warren Garst, Mary Lee Settle, Pat Conroy, Pierre Delattre, Dr. Dian Fossey, Dr. Jane Goodall, Andrew Weil, M.D., Martha Kingsbury, Steve Whan, Dr. Mark Ya. Azbel, Winifred Rosen, Congresswoman Shirley Chisholm, Malcolm Margolin, Anne Sexton, Mara Cary, Sharon Cadwallader, Jane Holtz Kay, Nancy Bruning, Suzanne Arms, Robin Paige, Dr. Thomas Goldstein, Cynthia Pearson, Margaret Stubbs, Michelle Seligson, The Honorable Frank M. Coffiin, Gay Courter, Susan Wittig Albert, Elizabeth Noble, Barbara Stecher, John Hillaby, Sherna Berger Gluck, Sally Swenson, Richard Frede, Laura Shapiro, Tom Cullen, Lauren Brown, Fred McTaggart, Sandy Jones, Sam Clark, Dr. Geneva Smitherman, Meg (Magda) Bogin, Oliver Cope, M.D., Oriana Fallaci, Sydney Walker III, M.D., John B. Simon, Marcy Heidish, Ellen Galinsky, William Luce, Harlow Robinson, Elzbieta Ettinger, Alan McGlashan